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Wearing Thin by `amolerouth:iconamolerouth:





I can hear my lover calling,
Yes I can hear him scream
But I cannot see to find him
In the darkness of my dreams

Your voice from out of nowhere
Begs me not to run away
Though I would gladly do so
If I could find my way

It's your name that I call
It's your face that I see
It's your voice in the night
Singing lovesongs to me

You push me away,
You pull me back in
You tear me apart
With a maniac grin...
And it's wearing thin
And it's wearing me thin

You walk a fine line,
You're scaring me stiff
You sell me the rope that
I'm hanging you with...
And it's wearing thin
And it's wearing me thin

You push me away,
You pull me back in
You sell me the rope
That I'm hanging you with...
And it's wearing thin
Yeah, it's wearing me thin
©2008 `amolerouth
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Submitted: January 27
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Author's Comments

This is my current pet project.

Advanced critique encouraged, but please remember that this is a song, and that the otherwise unforgivable flaws in metre are integral parts of the flow & melody. If you want a sound clip of me singing this, please let me know.

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~FallenAngelGurl:iconFallenAngelGurl: Jan 27, 2008, 12:19:15 AM
oh I love it! Love the lyrics ^^ And you sing it?!

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rawr >.<
~DivaQueen:iconDivaQueen: Apr 27, 2008, 11:20:06 PM
Wow, you have a wonderful way with rhyme. :)
`amolerouth:iconamolerouth: Apr 28, 2008, 10:38:33 AM
Thank you. :aww:

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:| This is my happy face.
~punk-freak13:iconpunk-freak13: May 31, 2008, 7:33:11 PM
wow....its really good

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its amazing the stuff you can get done when the teachers talking